I wish I could describe what you could do for attaching them...........
I know exactly what would fix it but I am not sure how to describe it.....
All I can say is they should not be so abruptly attached.......perhaps
reaching down toward the ribcage for a flow rather than an abrupt attachment.
Does any of that make sense??? Perhaps someone who does artwork can describe
I took some art classes, human form and other, and our instructor in one class made the observation that I am trying to explain now........in order to give it more flow rather than abruptness.