http://black-raven135.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] black-raven135.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kriadydragon 2011-09-18 12:45 am (UTC)


I don't care for all description but I don't care for nothing but dialog either. It tends to leave too much of what is happening to the reader's imagination.
A bit of that is fine, but not where I am forced to try to figure out what
a character is seeing and feeling about the situation....
BTW, I am struggling to develop more dialog, because I realize my writing has been largely POV and narrative driven......
Thanks so much for posting this dilemma.

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