Seeing how I beta'ed this, I've read it three times now. And I'm still loving it. I love the additions you made, especially the moment where Peter finds Neal.

And the sheer angst of the story still kills me. It's so, so dark, and so intense. Neal has got a lot of recovering to do after this. Another great story, even though it's kinda hard to read as you go through the torture together with Neal.