Thank you :D I'll admit that, at first with Holston, I wasn't in the mood to be more creative. But the more I wrote the more I realized that Holston needed to be this unremarkable, unmemorable person who is as an untypical bad guy as you can get. I ended up really enjoying writing him.

I guess because it's not present in the show itself, it always feels odd to write,

That, plus I'm always hesitant to do things to Neal that I feel would end up changing who he is. But, then, after posting the story, I started wondering if Neal is a lot more resilient than I give him credit for. Considering the things he's done, I wouldn't be surprised if he ended up in some pretty nasty trouble.