Well, the problem with the upcoming chapters isn't the length, it's whether or not they're making the story drag. Amrin has kind of a slow beginning with a lot of build, and while the chapters do introduce important characters, most of what happens is just kind of the same old, same old.

But, then it's been a while since I looked at the book, so the details of those chapters elude me, so they may be perfectly fine how they are.

And I do think I'm going to have to divide it into two books. It is a ridiculously long story.