Normally I don't read AUs, unless it's Ridley's Brotherhood Series (Supernatural AU), but I like your writing style so I thought I'd give this a shot. And I'm glad I did. It was very good. I really liked the idea you started playing with here and I would love to read more from this universe. I can understand John's hesitation to believe the team, and I loved how you slowly let him figure out that for once he had stumbled across people who weren’t planning to hurt him. Although, I understand his hesitation considering the way Rodney talked in the beginning, no wonder Sheppard was sure he would end up in the same situation as before.

Hopefully you'll consider giving us another story from this universe :)