Bravo! Thank you for posting this story here. I loved it! I knew that mark on John's chest was going to get him into trouble before he got off that planet. Teyla and Ronon showing up was perfect.
I really liked how you wrote John's reaction to returning to Atlantis and his recovery. The scene where he slowly remembers each of Carson's medical equipment was great - so touching. And I loved that it was a slow recovery, that it took some time for John to get over his ordeal, and you didn't just rush through it. Thanks for writing and posting another excellent story!!
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Date: 2008-11-09 02:11 am (UTC)From:I really liked how you wrote John's reaction to returning to Atlantis and his recovery. The scene where he slowly remembers each of Carson's medical equipment was great - so touching. And I loved that it was a slow recovery, that it took some time for John to get over his ordeal, and you didn't just rush through it. Thanks for writing and posting another excellent story!!