Very cool! I think we do forget sometimes that John is human, and still has moments of frailty and vulnerability. I think you write these moments well for him, and still keep him very much in character. I've always loved this story because of the emotional issues it delves into - the physical injury may have healed, but that is only half the battle most of the time. Thanks for the commentary on a story you wrote so long ago!
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Date: 2009-11-20 06:04 am (UTC)From: