Ooh, you did it! And I love it! (And believe me, I hear you about a seemingly simple plot going all rabid and demanding -- it's why I'm still working on your Running Hot story.)
"So is this the part where we cry into the camera about how scared we are?" -- lmfao.
And I love Neal being unable to sleep because it's too quiet. I actually know city-dwellers who've had that very problem when confronted with true silence at night. :)
Also fabulous: the noisy stretching during fishing. Even when Neal's mouth is shut, he makes noise. Bloody hilarious.
Very cute -- and nicely done! Thank you very much!
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Date: 2011-07-05 03:14 am (UTC)From:"So is this the part where we cry into the camera about how scared we are?" -- lmfao.
And I love Neal being unable to sleep because it's too quiet. I actually know city-dwellers who've had that very problem when confronted with true silence at night. :)
Also fabulous: the noisy stretching during fishing. Even when Neal's mouth is shut, he makes noise. Bloody hilarious.
Very cute -- and nicely done! Thank you very much!