My own rule of thumb when I don't know when to work in dialog is two things - when I need to emphasize something of importance and to bring narrative that's covering the passage of a certain amount of time into the present (Ex. they swam, they ate, they got back into the car. "So, have a good time?")
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Date: 2011-09-18 12:59 am (UTC)From: