Thank you :D Glad to hear it all worked. I was a little worried about having Neal fight his way free, being the non-violent person that he is, but also figured that even Neal has to fight his way out, sometimes. I also love the idea of him running into old partners but it was something I was iffy about because... well... OCs just don't seem to pack quite as much of a punch as established characters (especially since you have to devote some of the story to developing that OC).
But misgivings aside, I really adored writing this. Phillip might have been evil but he was a ton of fun to write ;)
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Date: 2011-11-04 02:54 am (UTC)From:But misgivings aside, I really adored writing this. Phillip might have been evil but he was a ton of fun to write ;)