Love this so far. I really like the outsider point of view. It has given you a way to tell the story that's different from what we normally see - particularly in the language you use. The style and word choice is so evocative and the images are so powerful. Can't wait to read the next bit - this story is totally compelling.
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Date: 2008-11-05 02:32 am (UTC)From: