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Title: Bedside Manner
Rating: PG for language.
Characters: John, Carson
Summary: A little whumpy tag to the Defiant One with a dash of comfort tossed in. For [livejournal.com profile] nebbyjen. I know I'm posting early, but I have a lot of projects going and didn't want this one ending up so buried that I forgot about it.

Defiant One Tag: Bedside Manner


John had been in two car wrecks and three chopper crashes in his life, and walked away from them all. The price was muscles so stiff the following day he honestly couldn't move. Add to that broken bones and, in a fit of self-pity, he lamented having walked away in the first place. Then he would come to his senses and narrow the lament down to being conscious.

John awoke to wishing he hadn't walked away. His shoulder burned hot and sharp, his ribs stabbed, his skull throbbed and the three butted heads for his attention. His stomach, unhappy with the situation, rebelled and the next thing John knew he was leaning over the side of the bench, pucking and adding to his agony.

Warm hands held him while he retched. “Easy, son, easy. I've got you.”

Carson. Despite the chaos, John's brain still registered that brogue as Carson's. That meant they were home, and it also meant that John had slept the entire fifteen hours.

Which had been a very bad idea, because now he could barely move without some part of his anatomy screaming at him. He'd needed to wake up, move around, keep his muscles warm and lax. Now he was paying for it. He was also pretty sure he had a concussion.

When the puking stopped, John felt himself manhandled from the bench to the softer padding of a gurney. Happy as his body was to be cushioned, his skull protested – very loudly – and he was back over the side coughing up dry heaves.

The warm hands returned, supporting him.

The dry heaves pissed off his ribs more than any other part of his body. The muscles cramped, locking his lungs, keeping out much needed air. John was rolled back onto his back so an oxygen mask could be strapped to his face. When the oxygen brushed over his tongue, it was like a wake up call to his lungs. The first breath, however, made his chest seize.

“Easy, lad. Slow and careful. Test your limit.”

The second inhale hurt a fraction less, the pain lost in the bliss of satisfied lungs.

John was vaguely aware of being undressed: his vest removed and his shirt split open. He flinched when a needle slid into the skin of his hand.

Then came sweet, sweet numb riding cool through his veins. Someone pressed his ribs gently but all he felt was a dull ache. The only sensation in his shoulder was a periodic pinch and slight pressure. John grinned, flying high. He angled his head enough to observe the process and arched an eyebrow at one hell of a bruise taking up most of the area of his chest, so dark not even his chest hair could hide it.

“D-aaaammn,” he croaked. “Wr'tthh... kicked m'ass good...” his stomach flipped. “C-raaaaap!” He was back over the side, back to puking. At least it didn't hurt this time. The warm hands had returned to support him, joined by others. Someone was rubbing between his shoulder blades, someone else his neck loosening the rock-solid muscles and easing a little of the throbbing in his skull.

Despite the lack of pain, John's stomach was hell-bent on expelling something and kept trying for a cruel amount of minutes. When it finally gave up, John was sweaty, shivering and spent. He needed all the help he could get to roll onto his back, that innocuous little motion making his head spin and his stomach threaten more. He gulped in air denied him by the pointless puking.

A hand touching lightly on his chest reminded him to slow it down.

“I gave you something that should help with the puking, son.” Something else was stuck into his ear. “Aye, and looks like a fever too boot. No surprise, this wound is pretty inflamed. Marie, get him started on antibiotics...”

John drifted between numb, dizzy and only moderately nauseas. Cool cloths wiped the grime from his face and chest and he leaned into them gratefully. Fingers danced around the wound at his shoulder until finally covering it up with a bandage and gauze. A sheet was pulled over him, then his pants removed – Carson was a good guy like that: letting his patients keep what dignity they could. His muscles were so locked he had to be helped into scrubs, and if it hadn't been for whatever Carson had given him to stop the puking, he'd be back to leaning over the side.

Once dressed, he was covered to his neck by a sheet. Chills wracking his body with shivers made him beg for more. Carson complied with a single thin, knit blanket but nothing else.

“”We need to make sure your temperature doesn't get any higher. I've given you something for the muscle aches I know you're feeling, something that should also help you sleep.” Carson grinned. “Since it's bloody obvious you won't be up for any food, we'll set that aside for now.” He then patted John's lower arm. “You get some rest, lad. I won't be far if you need anything.”

John gave him a wavering thumbs up. Carson chuckled softly. “All right then. Sleep. You're home, safe. We'll take care of you.”

John didn't doubt it and so easily complied.

The End
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Date: 2009-02-05 10:49 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] wildcat88.livejournal.com
Yay! Nice tag to one of my favorite eps.

Date: 2009-02-09 10:25 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks :)

Date: 2009-02-05 11:02 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kristen999.livejournal.com
Awesome dose of h/c with lovely Carson interactions. Love getting a glimpse of the old days and one of my favorite eppys.

Date: 2009-02-09 10:27 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I think that episode had the best whump, after 38 Minutes, that is ;).

Date: 2009-02-05 11:24 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] reen212000.livejournal.com
You had me at Defiant One... I do love any tag for that episode. Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2009-02-09 10:27 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading :D

Date: 2009-02-05 11:42 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] radioshack84.livejournal.com
Perfect, in every sense of the word. This, at the very least, ties as my favorite Defiant One tag ever. I love comfort fic. *sighs* =D

(Oh, and your story Breakfast, that made me crave the pancakes? The craving didn't go away. I finally gave in and got real pancakes last night, though your virtual ones were very tasty, and smudged the inside of my monitor with maple syrup.) ;)

Date: 2009-02-09 10:28 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks :)

Mwhahahaha! My evil plot to take over the world using pancakes is working ;)

Date: 2009-02-06 12:56 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] titan5.livejournal.com
The Defiant One has always been one of my favorite episodes and this was a wonderful tag. LOVED the descriptions. This gave us the H/C the episode set up and then abandoned. It's my personal belief that there can never be enough tags for this!!!

Date: 2009-02-09 10:30 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks! Yeah, I think this episode out of them all had the best whump. Although an infirmary scene would have been nice ;)

Date: 2009-02-06 12:59 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] d_odyssey.livejournal.com
I love Defiant One, still one of my faves. Perfect tag, good h/c since we missed any infirmary scenes in the ep. Great Carson, I miss his caring and professionalism. Very good dynamic and trust between John and Carson. Nicely done.

Date: 2009-02-09 10:32 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you. I can't explain why, but I like using Carson more than Keller for infirmary/comfort scenes.

Date: 2009-02-06 01:10 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tzzzz.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this.

Date: 2009-02-09 10:32 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks:D

Date: 2009-02-06 01:34 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tinypenny.livejournal.com
Great tag to a great episode! I miss Atlantis so much!

Date: 2009-02-09 10:33 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks :) I miss it, too. Thank goodness for the DVDs ;)

Date: 2009-02-06 04:07 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] writerjc.livejournal.com
There can never be enough Sheppard-centered Defiant one tags. Enjoyed this. :)

Date: 2009-02-09 10:34 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

Date: 2009-02-06 05:05 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] yellowvalley.livejournal.com
Oh my baby show!!! It's funny, I was just re-reading some of your stuff on Tuesday, since I was all sad about the cancellation.

Thanks for the tag! Defiant One was definitely in need of a few. ;)

Date: 2009-02-09 10:35 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'm usually not a fan of writing tags, but I do enjoy reading them and actually really enjoyed writing this one :D

Date: 2009-02-06 05:26 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tridget.livejournal.com
Ahhhhhh. John, Carson, The Defiant One and a good dose of h/c sure make a satisfying late night read.

Date: 2009-02-09 10:35 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Heh-heh, that episode did open the way for some excellent aftermath.

Date: 2009-02-06 06:03 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] splitbeak.livejournal.com
Cool. Solidly written all the way through. Excellent whumpage!

Date: 2009-02-09 10:36 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks! :D

Date: 2009-02-06 07:22 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] parisindy.livejournal.com
awwwww brilliant loved that!

Date: 2009-02-09 10:36 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks :)

Date: 2009-02-06 11:35 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] flingslass.livejournal.com
My ribs hurted with all the puking but it made sense. You don't get that much of a kicking and not womit.

Date: 2009-02-09 10:37 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Oh, yeah. Plus I like it when I'm able to make John sick ;)

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Date: 2009-02-06 12:53 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] bhgstoryteller.livejournal.com
One of the best eps ever. Well done. Great tag.

Date: 2009-02-09 10:38 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you :D

Date: 2009-02-06 02:53 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sherry57.livejournal.com
Thanks for a really good tag for one of my favourite episodes. It was lovely to read a tag to an episode such a long time after it aired - it's like going back to the good old days. You can do tags to all the good episodes of the past when you like!!

Date: 2009-02-09 10:38 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'm usually not big into writing tags, but I seem to be developing a taste for it.:D

Date: 2009-02-06 05:19 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] linzi5.livejournal.com
I'm so glad I found this! I LOVE TDO, and tags for it always make me so happy as they seem to fulfill the lack of follow up whump that was sadly missing in the episode for me. This didn't disappoint. Great to see the old Carson here too. Great job! :)

Date: 2009-02-09 10:39 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. Yeah, follow up whump would have been nice, but I enjoyed tagging it ;)

Date: 2009-02-06 06:57 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] coolbreeze1.livejournal.com
Oh, I love that episode. So glad to see another tag. Loved seeing Carson taking care of John.

Date: 2009-02-09 10:40 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Best episode to tag, IMO ;)

Date: 2009-02-06 11:31 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] vita-candeo.livejournal.com
Awesome tag! Poor John got whumped bad in that episode, but they left that end hanging! I'm glad you wrapped it up :)

Date: 2009-02-09 10:41 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks:D So much H/C potential, it's hard not to tag it ;)

Date: 2009-02-07 02:47 pm (UTC)From: [personal profile] shadadukal
shadadukal: (FS : Braca So Frelling Bored)
John & Carson friendship + tag to 'The Defiant One' = awesome. :D

Date: 2009-02-09 10:42 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks :D

Date: 2009-02-07 03:36 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kate-liz88.livejournal.com
I love John 'out of it'. Great tag and great Carson aswell

Date: 2009-02-09 10:42 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

Date: 2009-02-08 03:59 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ninja007.livejournal.com
I can't believe I forgot to post a comment!

This was wonderful!

I enjoyed it very much. Well written and loved all the H/C!!

Thank you!!

Date: 2009-02-09 10:43 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
You're welcome :D

Yessss!

Date: 2009-02-10 12:17 am (UTC)From: (Anonymous)
Thank you for this short, but wonderful conmfort tag, I love conmfort and you did it so well with Carson's voice and manners. Thanks again.
Sorry I forget to sign up. The previous was mine.

Date: 2009-02-10 01:48 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] lorr54.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! That was well done!

Date: 2009-02-12 09:32 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading :D
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