kriadydragon: (Shep icon 3)
Title: Ark Tag: Rigor
Rating: PG for language
Characters: John, Ronon
Summary: Tag to the Ark. Crash landings have consequences. John's learning that the hard way. For [livejournal.com profile] splitbeak

The Ark Tag: Rigor


John awoke to the inability to move. It started with his arm; when he went to rub his eyes, tight pain rippled from his shoulder through the rest of his body. Not one to jump to conclusions or give up, John attempted to inch his arm toward his face. But with every inch gained, the sharper the pain.

Then he tried to lift his head and that was a whole different kind of hell. A more compressing pain punched from his neck to his head, igniting a firework of sparks in his eyes. Grunting, he dropped his head back to the pillow.

“Son of a... bitch!” He knew, knew this would be the eventual end result of his greatest crash landing ever. You don't get pummeled by reentry and whipped around without repercussions, and his body was now thoroughly pissed off. John had foolishly thought he'd been in the clear after Beckett had given him the once-over. He'd been diagnosed as bruised, battered, wrenched but otherwise healthy and was released with a bottle of muscle relaxants and orders to rest. John had felt every jar of that crash still tugging at his muscles, but it hadn't been anywhere near this bad.

John momentarily entertained the thought that Beckett might have accidentally given him placebos. Or maybe John himself hadn't taken the recommended amount. But when John reached for the bottle on his night stand, his muscles seized, he yelped and his arm dropped like a rock back on the bed.

This was definitely his body taking its revenge. But John was anything if not cemented in all his resolves. Gritting his teeth, he lifted his arm, moving it inch by agonizing inch toward the pills. Only for a muscle spasm to twitch his arm and knock it and his comm off the night stand.

“Crap!” So be it. If that's how his body wanted to play, then he'd play. Positioning his arm back at his side then forcing the other arm to take up the same position, he started pushing himself up and, holy friggin' cow, Batman, did it suck. Locked muscles rippled and shuddered in storm-churned breakers of protest, through his arms, up and down his back, pushing against his ribs and exploding in his skull. He managed... he wasn't even sure – inches, centimeters - his eyes were squeezed too tight to tell. Then the pain locked his muscles into a solid mass and it was either stay where he was or drop back on the bed.

John dropped, panting and shivering from the sweat that had beaded on his skin.

“Ow.” He took a deep breath and that hurt, too. He had no idea how long he lay there, his head throbbing to the tempo his heart set, that throbbing dancing a tattoo down his neck into his spine before branching out through the rest of his body.

Damn it, if he could just move, grab the pills, get his limbs going and his blood flowing with the aid of a hot shower, then he'd be functional enough to pay Carson a visit for relaxants that actually worked.

John sighed. Never in his life had he been locked up this bad, and he wasn't a stranger to bone jolting nose dives into the ground. Reentry was a friggin' bitch.

The door chimed and a bass voice called, “Sheppard?”

John exhaled with heart-felt relief. “Ronon, buddy. In here!”

The door slid open and Ronon strolled in, coming to a bewildered halt on seeing John still in bed. “Wow, you're actually doing what Beckett said.”

John snorted. “You're a laugh riot. Help me up, I can't move.”

Ronon complied, throwing back the covers then taking John by the arm and hauling. It wasn't quite as bad as doing the work yourself but John's head still throbbed loud and sparks still popped in his vision. Joining it was dizziness that made the room spin and his stomach flip, and he couldn't stop the small whimper crawling out of his throat. When upright, he sat there, hunched and breathing through both the pain and nausea.

“You okay?” Ronon asked.

John swallowed before speaking. “No.” He was too uncomfortable to care how pathetic that had sounded, like a petulant whine. He swallowed again when his stomach acid splashed. “S-see that bottle on the floor? Pop it open and hand me two pills.

Ronon did so, along with the half-emptied plastic bottle on the nightstand. John tossed back the pills and chased them down with water.

“Now I need to um... move. Loosen up. Take a hot shower.”

“Got a better idea,” Ronon said. “Lie down.” But didn't wait for John to do so when he pushed him down by the shoulders, then maneuvered his legs back onto the bed. He rolled John onto his stomach and lifted up his shirt.

“Ronon...?”

“This might hurt a little but trust me, you'll thank me later.” Ronon then dug the heel of his hands into John's back, hard.

And it did hurt, like hell. Like the crash landing all over again. Ronon pushed, pulled and kneaded past muscle all the way to the bone with a strength that was going to leave impressive bruises. John's spine felt like it was being bent inwards, his ribs just a hair's breadth away from snapping. And when Ronon moved on to the neck, it seemed a miracle he didn't break it. After a moment that felt like an eternity, Ronon let up and lifted John back into a sitting position.

John shuddered. “Ow!”

Ronon just grinned. “Now lift your arms.”

John did so, or tried to, and although their range of motion was wider than before he still couldn't raise them over his head. It didn't matter, it was enough for Ronon to get Sheppard's shirt off. After that, he helped John to his feet and to the bathroom.

“Please tell me I'll be able to handle removing my pants myself.”

“Yeah, just take it slow.” Ronon eased him on the toilet seat lid. After a light clap on the shoulder, he left John to handle the rest.

It wasn't easy, but it was doable. John got his pants down low enough to kick them off the rest of the way. Then came the blessed shower with equally blessed hot water, bringing back-up to the pills that coaxed his muscles from their solid state. When he felt himself as cooked and melted as he was going to get, he wrapped a towel around his waist and stepped out into his room.

Ronon was waiting, standing next to the bed and a pile of folded clothes: boxers, sweats and a T-shirt. John had to sit to get his pants on, Ronon taking the first part by getting them over his feet. More help was needed for the shirt, because despite the loosened muscles, it still wasn't enough for John to lift his arms over his head.

“Hold them out,” Ronon said. John did. Ronon slipped the shirt over them then up over John's head.

“Thanks, buddy,” John said.

Ronon nodded. “No problem. Need anything else?”

“The ability to go down to the mess hall and eat. I'm starved.”

Ronon grinned. “McKay's probably down there. I'll get him to bring something. What else?”

“Beckett. I'm gonna need something stronger than what he gave me.”

Both requests were easily and swiftly answered via the comm. With that taken care of, Ronon helped John ease himself back onto the bed, adjusting the pillow to rest his back against it. The pills weren't much, but between the hot shower and Ronon's ministrations, the pain wasn't so bad, now. More a dull ache, sans the personal fireworks show.

With John settled, Ronon grabbed the laptop off the desk, a DVD and a chair. The laptop and movie he set up at the foot of the bed, then parked himself in the chair.

“You don't have to stick around, big guy,” John said. “Not that I'm not saying I don't want you around, but I'm pretty sure you've got things to do.”

“Not really,” Ronon said, which may or may not be the truth but John saw no point in arguing it. He shifted into a position that took a little more pressure of his back, and sighed, not better but definitely getting there.

The End

Date: 2009-02-15 12:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] karri-kln1671.livejournal.com
*claps* :D I love it when Ronon takes care of John. :)

Date: 2009-02-17 05:33 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
As do I :)

Date: 2009-02-15 01:01 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] padawan-aneiki.livejournal.com
Aww, poor bud. lol But I love that it's Ronon who helps him out. :D YAY nicely done!

Date: 2009-02-17 05:34 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I don't know why, but out of all the team I love it when it's Ronon taking care of John. :D

Date: 2009-02-15 01:19 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] writerjc.livejournal.com
This was great - poor Shep! I could almost feel his pain. Great descriptions. And Ronon was so matter of fact in helping out. So Ronon. Very nice. :)

Date: 2009-02-17 05:35 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'd actually set out to make it a team deal, but this felt like such a Ronon thing that I automatically settled for him.

Date: 2009-02-15 02:03 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tridget.livejournal.com
Such a lovely warm story. You portrayed the friendship so nicely.

Date: 2009-02-17 05:36 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks :)

Date: 2009-02-15 02:06 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] coolbreeze1.livejournal.com
Great tag. John was jostled pretty badly in that crash - nice to see the aftereffects. Ronon taking care of him was perfect.

Date: 2009-02-17 05:37 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. It help that I'd had some aching muscles of my own at the time I came up with this ;) I love taking my discomfort out on Shep :D

Date: 2009-02-15 02:19 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] titan5.livejournal.com
I love these little whumpy tags - makes the episode even better to see what actually would have happened to anyone going through that. Also loved Ronon jumping in to help.

Date: 2009-02-17 05:38 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks.

makes the episode even better to see what actually would have happened to anyone going through that.

Doesn't it just? :)

Date: 2009-02-15 02:54 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] drufan.livejournal.com
Yes, just what I needed. This made me smile.

Date: 2009-02-17 05:38 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Glad I could please :D

Date: 2009-02-15 04:21 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] jujuberry136.livejournal.com
Yay ronon! You're awesome :D

Date: 2009-02-17 05:39 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Isn't he? :)

Date: 2009-02-15 05:05 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] abracah.livejournal.com
"Ow" is right!! I can almost feel the pain. Nice job. I like how Ronon took over.

Date: 2009-02-17 05:40 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
The motivation for this came from my own sroe muscles. I like taking my pain out on Shep;) And like Ronon to help him feel better.

Date: 2009-02-15 05:49 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] radioshack84.livejournal.com
Nice angle for a tag for this episode, and great descriptions. I was wincing right along with Shep, and I'm really developing a liking for stories like this with John & Ronon. :)

Date: 2009-02-17 05:40 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. And careful. The John and Ronon dynamic has a way of eating your brain. It did for me ;)

Date: 2009-02-15 11:23 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] flingslass.livejournal.com
I felt like that after my Spin Class the other day :D

Date: 2009-02-17 05:41 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Heh, I was venting my own discomfort out on sheppard when I came up with this ;)

Date: 2009-02-15 11:35 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] marilla-pm67.livejournal.com
Heeee ...

That's great. I like the friendship.

Thanks
Sam.

Date: 2009-02-17 05:41 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading :D

Date: 2009-02-15 04:32 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] tzzzz.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this. I was waiting for someone to write a good Ark tag. Now somebody just needs to do submersion...

Date: 2009-02-17 05:32 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. And it's funny you should say that as I wrote a tag a while back.

http://kriadydragon.livejournal.com/69194.html

Coolbreeze also wrote an excellent tag. But I need to find it first :/.

Date: 2009-02-15 04:53 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] seramercury.livejournal.com
Excellent tag. It's rare that you get to see Ronon in the position to help John in this way. :)

Date: 2009-02-17 05:42 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I love finding reasons for Ronon to help John out in such ways :D

Date: 2009-02-15 07:55 pm (UTC)From: (Anonymous)
Excellent tag. I just love John and Ronon stories. I wish there were more around. Love how Ronon is so matter of fact. I adore their friendship.

Date: 2009-02-17 05:44 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I love John and Ronon friendship stuff but, yeah, it is rare.

Date: 2009-02-15 08:30 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] splitbeak.livejournal.com
Oh yay! That was awesome. Thanks for writing this. I love when Ronon gets to come to the rescue.

Date: 2009-02-17 05:45 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I love any reason for Ronon to come to the rescue, especially when it involves helping a hurting John.

Date: 2009-02-15 09:26 pm (UTC)From: [personal profile] shadadukal
shadadukal: (SW : Leia Not just a girl)
Ronon taking care of John is lub. :D

Well done and thanks for sharing!

Date: 2009-02-17 05:45 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Ronon taking care of John is the best :D Thanks for reading.

Date: 2009-02-16 12:52 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tinypenny.livejournal.com
Great tag! Thanks so much...needed some Sheppardy-goodness.

Date: 2009-02-17 05:46 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
You're welcome :)

Date: 2009-02-16 02:07 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ninja007.livejournal.com
This completely reminded me of when I started in a martial arts instructor training program at the age of 40. The morning of the second day I could not get out of bed. Everything hurt. I had to roll, literally ROLL, out of bed to get out. I could hear my family laughing from the dining room after the "thump" I made when I hit the floor.

Poor John.

Great fic Chica!!

Date: 2009-02-17 05:47 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I was suffering a sore leg when I thought this story up. I find taking my discomfort out on John to be very cathartic ;)

Date: 2009-02-16 10:09 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] sakurablue13.livejournal.com
having your muscles all cramped up really sucks
I envy John for having Ronon around to give him a hand

Date: 2009-02-17 05:48 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Yes, it would be nice to have a Ronon to help out with muscle cramps. Or John. Better yet, Ronon and John ;)

Date: 2009-02-17 03:59 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sakurablue13.livejournal.com
ooooh... i'm starting to have some nasty imaginations...
LOL

Date: 2009-02-24 09:12 pm (UTC)From: [personal profile] esteefee
esteefee: A golden haired, green-eyed Little Fuzzy from the book by H. Beam Piper (yeah)
Aw. ::pets Shep:: and yay Ronon to a unique rescue!

Date: 2011-07-10 11:08 am (UTC)From: [personal profile] esteefee
esteefee: John pouting while Ronon leans over him. (poutyjohnandronon)
SO AWESOME! I knew you had written an Ark coda, and a terrific one to boot. \o/ Ronon! my Shep hero! I love how you write their friendship, always, always.

Date: 2009-02-26 07:12 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] wildcat88.livejournal.com
Repercussions from the crash landing! Yay! Nicely done.

Date: 2009-02-27 02:15 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks! And you're back, yay! Because I have so much for you to beta! (Just kidding ;))

Date: 2009-02-27 04:19 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] wildcat88.livejournal.com
Hee! Bring it on! And I've been working on that fic for you. I'm about halfway through but the [livejournal.com profile] sheps_atlantis ficathon and vacation have interfered. I haven't forgotten though! I hope to have it done in the next couple of weeks.

Date: 2009-03-08 04:29 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] d_odyssey.livejournal.com
This is more like it, no way John walked away from that crash with no after affects. Nice look at the Ronon-John friendship. I love Ronon taking care of John, in his matter of fact, no pity way. Nicely done.

Date: 2009-12-09 06:03 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you. Yeah, it kind of bugged me that Teyla was the one in the infirmary bed and not John. But it made for great fodder to get Ronon to take care of John :D

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