kriadydragon: (Shep icon 3)
Title: After
Rating: PG for language
Characters: Sheppard, McKay
Summary: After a rough day, Rodney give Sheppard a hand.

A/N: Just a little something I whipped up when I was once again hit with the major urge to write some aftermath-comfort fic. Despite having already written some aftermath-comfort fic that I just sent off to be beta'd :D. this story, however, though edited, hasn't been beta'd. Ye have been warned.

After


It was pathetic. John Sheppard: wet, shivering and too weak to so much as blink like a normal human being.

And alive.

Of course he was alive, very much alive and very, very wet, dripping puddles onto the floor soaking into Rodney's knees as he unlaced John's boots. He sighed. The material of his pants were of the kind that turned viciously itchy when wet, and the damn water was cold.

“What did you do, stand under a waterfall?” Rodney huffed. “Why the hell am I even doing this?” He yanked off one boot, followed by a sopping sock plopping like a pile of cotton slug onto the floor. He started work on the second boot. “I swear, it's like you have a fetish for insane rescue missions, the more wrong they go, the better.”

But it had been a success. A week of effort had seen the return of a missing team and two of Teyla's people, with only minor injuries and one unlucky marine in need of surgery but going to live to show for it. Rodney wanted to think that Sheppard would call this a good day. Except knowing him, he was going to bristle and brood over the bad guys who had done this still being out there. Rodney didn't even know who the bad guys were. He didn't know anything, stuck deep in the city fighting his own battle against one hell of a power surge and getting the 'gate back on line. He'd fixed the 'gate, but still didn't know what had caused the surge, which was pissing him off like nothing ever had.

Rodney looked up with a, “huh.” Maybe that was why Zelenka was avoiding him.

He worked the second boot free a little roughly according to Sheppard's quiet groan. Really it should have been impossible that Sheppard was sitting up; slumped, half-asleep, but up.

“Sorry,” Rodney grunted. “This really is more of a Teyla thing.”

Teyla was with her people, making sure they were all right. Ronon was off-world with fresh marines digging up clues to the whereabouts of the kidnappers. Not that Sheppard knew about the little mission, or would know until after a good eight hours plus per Jennifer's orders. She was inconsolable when people didn't obey her oh-so-wise medical commands, and an inconsolable Jennifer made for an equally unhappy Rodney.

Rodney stood and proceeded to wrestle the mud-caked and recalcitrant vest off Sheppard. The damn zipper kept sticking.

“You know you're going to have to replace your blanket,” he said. He grit his teeth, tugged, yanked and twisted until, finally, the stupid zipper slide effortlessly open – snot-nosed piece of crap. He slid the vest down John's arms and dropped it on top of the oozing pile of socks.

Rodney sneered. Now for the fun part – not. He peeled, and it really did feel like peeling, Sheppard's shirt off his back, adding it to the slopping pile. Shirt-free, he was now able to finally dry Sheppard off. Just looking at him wet and shivering was making Rodney cold. He softly patted Sheppard's skin, careful of the bruises.

Now for the pants. Crap, Rodney hated this. He had Sheppard lay on his back, helping him to make sure he didn't add another bruise to the many that that thing he called his hair was hiding, turning his brain to mush even if Jennifer had ruled out a concussion. All Rodney could say was thank goodness for lean Colonels who had no love for tight clothing. The waist of the pants were a cinch to get off without all that tugging, yanking and potential flashing of things Rodney really didn't want to see. The legs, however – even being skinny things that they were – refused to be accommodating, and Rodney was sure leg hair was being lost in the process.

“That's what you get for playing in the rain,” Rodney sing-songed.

Sheppard didn't react, neither to the comment nor his skin being chafed. He was out cold if the steady movement of his chest was anything to go by. Rodney patted his legs dry. He refused to touch the boxers. He then went to the small closet that came with every room where Sheppard no doubt stored extra blankets. It's where Rodney stored his.

Jackpot. He took out two and covered John with both. The first he tucked around John, leaving no gaps. The second he draped loosely.

Kind deed done for the day.

Before heading out, Rodney patted where he knew Sheppard's shoulder to be.

“You did good today, pal.”

He left Sheppard to his well-earned rest.

The End

Date: 2009-04-16 02:04 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] jennytork.livejournal.com
Brilliant!

Date: 2009-04-17 01:49 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks!

And alive

Date: 2009-04-16 02:11 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] black-raven135.livejournal.com
but you always leave him..........barely alive
ROFL
Rodney, the supreme nursemaid of Pegasus, always seems to pick Sheppard up.....sometimes literally......

I feel inclined to want to just 'hug' him.....as I always
do when I finish reading one of your Sheppard-barely-makes-it
back-alive stories.

As always a great story.......

Re: And alive

Date: 2009-04-17 01:50 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you:). Yeah, that's how I like my Shep - barely alive and one of his team taking care of him :D

Date: 2009-04-17 01:50 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks:)

Date: 2009-04-16 03:32 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] writerjc.livejournal.com
yay! :) liked it a lot

Date: 2009-04-17 01:51 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you :D

Date: 2009-04-16 03:32 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ninja007.livejournal.com
Well done! Well done!

Loved this immensely. Great writing. Told the story all through Rodney's work and gripe.

Bravo!

Date: 2009-04-17 01:51 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks!:D

Date: 2009-04-16 04:02 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] radioshack84.livejournal.com
"that *thing* he called his hair" lol!

Very nice moment between the boys. =D

Date: 2009-04-17 01:52 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I thought it was high time I poked fun at the hair ;)

Date: 2009-04-16 05:04 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] titan5.livejournal.com
Ahhhh, I so needed that. I love Rodney taking care of John, and griping the whole way only to do something at the end that shows he really didn't mind that much. So Rodney!! Awesome as always!!

Date: 2009-04-17 01:54 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you :) I so love Rodney taking care of John, because you know he doesn't like it, but because it's his friend, he does it anyway and I adore that concept ;)

Date: 2009-04-16 05:38 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] parisindy.livejournal.com
awww so sweet ..

Date: 2009-04-17 01:54 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks :D

Date: 2009-04-16 07:26 am (UTC)From: [personal profile] sholio
sholio: sun on winter trees (SGA-Sheppard rain)
Awww, that was sweet! :D

Date: 2009-04-17 01:54 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you:)

Date: 2009-04-16 08:14 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] tridget.livejournal.com
Wonderful! Such a sweet bit of comfort. Poor John may be cold, wet and shivering but the story gives me warm fuzzies.

Date: 2009-04-17 01:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

Date: 2009-04-16 12:14 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] x-erikah-x.livejournal.com
Aw, sweet. Wet Shep and comforting Rodney, no better way to start the day.

Date: 2009-04-16 04:13 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sakurablue13.livejournal.com
you've said it all...

Date: 2009-04-17 01:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you :D

Date: 2009-04-16 05:02 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] coolbreeze1.livejournal.com
Nice! Poor, cold, wet, whumped Shep...I'm insanely curious about how he got into that situation and what those bad guys did to him, but I loved Rodney taking care of him back home. :)

Date: 2009-04-17 02:00 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks!

The bad guys really didn't do much. It was just your standard chase, rescue, etc with maybe a little fighting on the side. Nothing major, just a way to exhaust poor shep so that Rodney has to take care of him ;)

Date: 2009-04-16 10:04 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] whiskydrinker.livejournal.com
Awww...lovely.

Date: 2009-04-17 02:00 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you.

PS: I'm still trying to come up with an idea in which Sheppard is whumped on his knees, so stay tuned ;)

Date: 2009-04-17 12:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] lcshepp.livejournal.com
Loved it, just wished it was longer.

Date: 2009-04-17 02:02 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'd thought about doing something longer, but this was meant to be a quick indulgence so I went with something short and sweet ;)

Date: 2009-04-17 03:07 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] eshtah.livejournal.com
"Rodney looked up with a, “huh.” Maybe that was why Zelenka was avoiding him."

Tee hee. I liked this line. Great story!

Date: 2009-04-18 12:36 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks!

Date: 2009-04-17 06:17 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] reen212000.livejournal.com
Oh Rodney! I like this one.

Date: 2009-04-18 12:37 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thank you:)

Date: 2009-04-17 01:36 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] jujuberry136.livejournal.com
I love your caring Rodney! Still bitching all the while, but his heart is in the right place and he's being a great friend.

Love it lots :D

Date: 2009-04-18 12:37 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. That's what I like about Rodney - he gripes but he cares :D

Date: 2009-04-17 07:54 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] drufan.livejournal.com
Hee, I just got a whole bunch of warm fuzzies! Thanks!

Date: 2009-04-18 12:38 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Heh, you're welcome. Warm fuzzies are the best :D

Date: 2009-04-17 10:46 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] alzarin-red.livejournal.com
As always, you have Rodney's mannerisms down well - doing the right thing, but still not happy about it. :) Thanks

Date: 2009-04-18 12:39 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Rodney's kind of like an M&M - hard shell on the outside but with a soft center ;)

Date: 2009-04-18 09:52 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] roo1965.livejournal.com
This was an intersting way to go- we come in at the end of the story...shamelessly i wanted the "before" story even if was a simple get chased by bad guys, but then i'm a sucker for the whump factor. Your comfort though, was wonderfully observed with Rodney's kvetching. i can only asuume that as Sheppard was only exhausted and soaked through Keller let him stagger off to his own quarters rather than shower in the Infirmary...unless he slipped out while she wasn't looking ( but maybe i'm just being pedantic)...i did enjoy this fic very much- honest!

Date: 2009-04-18 10:39 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks!

I'll admit - for me whump is a means to get to the comfort, and sometimes I don't want to put up with the hows and whys just to get to that point, especially if there's no reason for it. But I do understand the frustration of not getting the entire story ;)

Date: 2009-04-19 12:20 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] shepsgirl72.livejournal.com
Bless Rodney, he means well, but he just can't help but feel his own discomfort first and foremost. Still, he really does care, doesn't he? Nice friendship piece.

Date: 2009-04-20 08:43 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks. That's what I like about Rodney: he cares enough to sacrifice his own comforts, but makes sure everyone knows he isn't happy about it ;) Silly Rodney.

Date: 2009-04-20 02:39 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kristen999.livejournal.com
That left me with many warm fuzzies. Brash with words, sweet with actions.

I have a soft spot for a cold, soaked John in need of warmth.

Date: 2009-04-20 08:44 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks!:D A cold, exhausted - and on occasion sick - John wrapped uo cozy in bed is my happy place ;)

Date: 2009-04-23 01:03 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] wildcat88.livejournal.com
Exhausted Shep + Caring Rodney = Perfect!

Date: 2009-04-23 11:56 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] kriadydragon.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

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