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Attention Thoughtcrimes fans! I need help with a plot.
I want to do a story in which Freya discovers that something unpleasent is happening to Brendan. I wanted to do something along the lines of Brendan in the hospital and maybe a nurse mistreating him or not taking care of him right, but neither Brendan nor anyone else is aware except for Freya. But I want to do it in a way that's plausible and not like I'm dissing the nursing profession or something.
Anyone know how I could accomplish a plot like this? Or know of another way I could pull it off? I was also thinking that Brendan is healing at home and a relative or someone who's supposed to be taking care of him isn't. The thing is, it has to be that Brendan isn't aware of it.
My brain refuses to work the problem out. I need help. Know what I could do to make such a plot work?
I want to do a story in which Freya discovers that something unpleasent is happening to Brendan. I wanted to do something along the lines of Brendan in the hospital and maybe a nurse mistreating him or not taking care of him right, but neither Brendan nor anyone else is aware except for Freya. But I want to do it in a way that's plausible and not like I'm dissing the nursing profession or something.
Anyone know how I could accomplish a plot like this? Or know of another way I could pull it off? I was also thinking that Brendan is healing at home and a relative or someone who's supposed to be taking care of him isn't. The thing is, it has to be that Brendan isn't aware of it.
My brain refuses to work the problem out. I need help. Know what I could do to make such a plot work?
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Date: 2007-09-01 05:04 am (UTC)From:http://www.world-import.com/conversion.htm
I got my copy of TC from Amazon, in case you needed to know. Not many other places to find it I'm afraid.