Wayfarers Ch. 6

[kriadydragon]

At last! Wayfarers chapter six is up. Took me long enough because I kept having trouble getting it where it needed to go. I promise the other chapters shouldn't take as long. Two chapters left then an epilogue.

Chapter 6

Comments

[wraithfodder.livejournal.com]

Yes! :)

[d_odyssey.livejournal.com]

Yes, a new chapter of 'Wayfarers'! Enjoyed this chapter, the team sticking with and helping one another, the responsibility Ronon feels, the worry that passes between Rodney and Ronon. Lots of good angst, building the suspense and making me want more. Glad to see you back with this story.

[coolbreeze1.livejournal.com]

Another excellent chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. I thought you did a great job showing the perceptiveness of Ronon, not just in noticing the hunters but also in understanding Rodney's need to contribute to the effort and stand watch. Well done!

[giusytriso.livejournal.com]

Fantastic chapter!! Ronon character was developped very well and I especially loved his subtle way to help John not to feel useless and to make Rodney gain self-confidence.
Can't wait to read more.