Beta? Please? Pretty Please? And a Question.

[kriadydragon]

Would anyone be willing to beta an original fic? It's the first part of my online story, and it shouldn't be a particularly long read (it's only eight chapters), and all I really need is for someone to point out any plot holes or points of confusion they come across. The basic premise is that it's about a guy who can see the dead and uses magic to deal with them (there's more to it than that, of course, but that's the gist of it). Warning wise there's some violence and an animal death but that's about it.

The help would be much appreciated. Although I would need it done around March (not the beginning of March, just sometime within the month).

Also, does anyone know anything about service dogs? The main character of the story suffers seizures and so had his dog trained as a service dog. Mostly I just need to know what method by which a service dog would warn their master that a seizure is coming on. For my story I mostly have the dog whine and paw at the character's leg.

Comments

[junnights.livejournal.com]

found this one:) http://news.nationalgeographic.com/news/2003/04/0416_030416_seizuredogs.html - Essentially depends on both the dog and the owner (what the dog can do/learn and what the owner needs++ (and country and where they live and so on and so on... (if the dog needs to get help or just alert the owner for the possible seuzure++)). (hope that helps?... my googlefy is pretty decent...).. other than that:) http://servicedogcentral.org/content/faq/60 might be of help for anything else:)

[karri-kln1671.livejournal.com]

I can do it, if you've not had any takers.

[kriadydragon.livejournal.com]

Awesome :D Thank you so much. I just need you to PM me your email address.

[sarievenea.livejournal.com]

I am also willing to do it. :)

[kriadydragon.livejournal.com]

Great! Thank you. I just need you to PM me your email address (which I probably have, but it's been so long I can't remember which one it is :/).