Doppelganger Plot Bunny for Sale!

[kriadydragon]

I hate being a season behind. Spoilers are fun but they don't cut it in getting to know an episode. I got an idea for a Doppelganger tag, but since I haven't seen the episode, I don't feel right about writing it.

I liked to see a story that deals with Sheppard being the one whose face the entity took. The aftermath with people, maybe, still afraid of him. How they try not to be afraid but can't help it, Sheppard finding out, maybe with a bit of whump (Ronon or Teyla gets spooked and accidentally attacks John, hurting him.)

Is this story idea even possible?

I'll even do a story in return with a plot of your choosing. If no one is able to use it (too busy, or something else) I can read the transcript and try to write it, but I'll need someone to beta it to make sure it works. I'm not usually big on writing tags, and when I do write them I prefer having seen the episode first.




 

Comments

[kriadydragon.livejournal.com]

I just read it and left a comment. I thought the back and forth worked very well. I tend to be an impatient reader, and jumping into the action like that really hooked me. At the same time, the back and forth kept me hooked - I got an explanation for how it came to be, with interludes that satisfied my need to know what was going on with injured Sheppard and the wolves.

Sorry for the long critique, but what you did worked very, very well.

I may very well get impatient and end up writing a DP tag without seeing the episode (GW already has the transcript for it). We'll see, we'll see.

As for your story, I'm still working it out in my head, but I think I have an idea now. Hopefully I'll have it up sometime next week.