Fic Exchange, take two

[kriadydragon]

Believe it or not I'm doing this because I'm in dire need of an idea for some Shep-whump. I'm working on the next chapter for Wayfarers and am half-way through, but I've been having trouble with it and the lack of Shep getting whumped in it doesn't help (he doesn't get whumped until next chapter). I've been trying to come up with a few Shep-whump one-shots but I can never get an ending for them. Either that or they end up not being a one-shot.

Anyways, someone give me an idea. Nothing vague such as "Shep being tortured." Give me some plots to work with, something rather unique if possible. In return, I'd like someone to do a tag to Irresistable that involves Sheppard having a negative reaction to being given the phermone. Maybe Sheppard is still taking medication for his cold and the phermone reacts to it. Or maybe it reacts to the cold virus itself, making Sheppard sicker or insane or something. There really aren't a lot of Irrisistable whumpy tags and there was such potential for them. I'd actually thought of one but couldn't figure out an ending.

Comments

[alipeeps.livejournal.com]

I wrote an Irresistible tag fic as part of my A World of Hurt series... it's not mega-whump as the series tries to stay close to canon but I put rather more emphasis/built up on the whump he did suffer during the ep.

As for a oneshot idea... of the top of my head, how's about this?

Whilst exploring an uninhabited planet, Shep and another member of the team (your choice) fall into an overgrown, abandoned well. The walls are too sheer to climb out and the water is too deep to reach the bottom standing up. The other person who falls in with Shep is knocked unconscious by the fall and he has to keep their head above water until one of the remaining two team members can get back to the gate and bring back help. There is maybe a small ridge along the wall under the water that Shep can just about stand/balance on or a small crevice in the wall that he can jam a hand in to try and hold himself and the other person above the water but the water is freezing cold and as time goes on he is getting cold and shivery and numb and the strain of holding on is making his muscles tremble and ache and he's struggling to keep them both above water but he has to and he refuses to give up. End it with either them being rescued or even Shep losing strength and slipping under the water just as help arrives... and waking up in the infirmary, with his first concern being for his team-mate because he let them down by not keeping them above water.

Detailed enough plot idea for ya? Ending planned and everything so shouldn't spiral out into another WIP.

[kriadydragon.livejournal.com]

Doh! I knew I was forgetting one.

Hmmm, I like that idea. I could totally work with that. Thanks.