Fic Exchange, take two

[kriadydragon]

Believe it or not I'm doing this because I'm in dire need of an idea for some Shep-whump. I'm working on the next chapter for Wayfarers and am half-way through, but I've been having trouble with it and the lack of Shep getting whumped in it doesn't help (he doesn't get whumped until next chapter). I've been trying to come up with a few Shep-whump one-shots but I can never get an ending for them. Either that or they end up not being a one-shot.

Anyways, someone give me an idea. Nothing vague such as "Shep being tortured." Give me some plots to work with, something rather unique if possible. In return, I'd like someone to do a tag to Irresistable that involves Sheppard having a negative reaction to being given the phermone. Maybe Sheppard is still taking medication for his cold and the phermone reacts to it. Or maybe it reacts to the cold virus itself, making Sheppard sicker or insane or something. There really aren't a lot of Irrisistable whumpy tags and there was such potential for them. I'd actually thought of one but couldn't figure out an ending.

Comments

[karri-kln1671.livejournal.com]

Here's the idea:

The team gate to a feudal like society that uses a plant that makes people happy and compliant to keep it subjects producing for the kingdom, despite the horrendous state the monarchy leave them in. The team eats some and become willing servants of the realm, but John for some reason doesn't eat any, and then, after a brief struggle to escape his own team, he has to keep from being captured and imprisoned, while trying to convince his team to rejoin him, all while unable to eat because the only thing readily available is the mind-controlling food. He can't contact Atlantis for help because Rodney removed the control crystals to prevent John bringing in a team of Marines to force the team to return to Atlantis. Atlantis doesn't try to make contact, either, because Rodney told them every thing was fine and reenables the gate to check in times he's specified so they won't get nervous.

[kriadydragon.livejournal.com]

Huh. I'd actually thought up something similar once. It was a John and Rodney friendship fic, where they're stucck on a planet where the food is tainted by a chemical that makes the inhabitants emotionally unstable. Rodney has to eat because of his hypoglycemia. John, however, refrains from eating. Because of the chemical, Rodney gets violent toward John, angry that he's starving when all he needs to do is eat. But withdrawal from the chemical is severe and can be deadly. So it's all a rock and a hard place for them.

The thing is, I still want to work with idea (not to say I can't do both). I think I might be able to do something with yours if I can keep it a one-shot. That's been the problem with my ideas as of late, they keep turning into chapter fic.

[karri-kln1671.livejournal.com]

Oh, no worries. :)